RagingPogo's art Reviews on Newgrounds

7 Art Reviews

2011-12-25 19:45:08

meh

i personally dont like it that much. the arms and legs look pretty messed up, no actual shape. the shading is okay, though some shadow on the right arm is missing. the leaf doesnt have a shadow at all, neither on itself nor on the apple

the face is... well... basic? its cute, but it doesnt fit the arms and legs. you could say its a contrast, but its not clear enough for that imho. id stick to the idea of a muscle-apple and make its face simliar, or exaggerate the contrast more, both would be nice

and then theres the picture of the apple. i dont know if i like the fact you took an actual photo. it makes the arms, face and leaf seem out of place more than they are anyway.

its nice and its a good start for your style, but nothing overly awesome. herzlichen glÃ¼ckwunsch for the frontpage though, nice to see something minimalistic can be frontpaged too

gruÃY und schmus

yofoodiefoodie responds:

thanks for the long review. i really love the nrwgrounds community. it's not that fucked up like deviantart. on newgrounds, they really tell you what they think and don't just fav it or not
thanks for the critique and the 4 points, mein deutscher freund, i'll keep that in mind for the next muscle-fruits!

Skully Man

2011-12-18 21:07:37

good job

pretty good one, looks very cool on first sight

only the perspective isnt quite right, especially around the right eye (which should be more like a hole i guess?)

apart from that its pretty sweet

SuperNerdyLove responds:

Thanks, yea I know my perspective is off, I have a hard time with human features. Even if this one is dead lol. Thanks for the tip, it will be well noted :)

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